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Wind

Walking through the deep, deep snow.
Snow was getting caught in my claws.
I knew I would have to rest soon.
The cool winter wind made the fur on my back fly up.
The cool wind began to hurt the little skin that was showing.
I turned around to see more wolves walking my way.
I didn't understand.
Were they coming to help me find my clan?
No, they were my clan.
I saw my love, with her dazzaling eyes and her pitch black fur.
"Jake," she asked,"Is that you?"
I was shocked that Elizabeth had remembered my name; I had been lost for a while.
I ran to her, overly happy to see her.
As I ran closer to her she started to fade away.
No, I thought. She was just there, I don't understand!!!
How could she be here one minute and gone the next?

I woke up gasping for air.
Darn, I thought, another dream.
All of the sudden the cold winter wind blew in my back.
I turned around, startled.
C'mon Jake, I thought to myself, you've got to calm down.
But I couldn't, for there was Elizabeth, again.

This time it wasn't a dream, I could feel it.
I ran toward her shouting with joy, for my love and I had been reunited.
©2007-2009 ~psycho654
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Author's Comments

Okay, so I'm experimenting a little bit...
okay a lot.
This is my first piece of writting in which I was writting for a wolf.
I thought it came out pretty good for it being my first.

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:iconsynconi:
That is so sweet! It's nice having the two twists, makes you much happier at the end! ;) xx

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:giggle: Smile...It confuses people.
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Yeah, I was going to make it a series but it would only 2 peices long.
I'm glad with the way the ending turned out. :D
Thx!!

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:iconsynconi:
You're always welcome! ;) xx

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:giggle: Smile...It confuses people.
:iconrithumdragon:
i love it! so much! LOVE IT! :heart: :strip: woooOO! :lmao: *flail*

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I may be frumpy, but I'm super smart. Check out my grades-they're As, for a start. What I lack in looks, well I make up in heart, and well guys, that's totally awesome! This year I plan to study a lot-that would be cool if you were actually hot!
:iconpsycho654:
LOL!! Thanks Maggie-chan!!!
I love the new icon!!

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~xxxrainbow-clubxxx
*Writers-Club
Your eyes in the glass wear your face as a mask...(Cellar Door by Escape the Fate.)
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:pride:
:iconpsycho654:
:D

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~xxxrainbow-clubxxx
*Writers-Club
Your eyes in the glass wear your face as a mask...(Cellar Door by Escape the Fate.)
♫ ☯
:pride:
:iconrithumdragon:
:dance: thanks! :D

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I may be frumpy, but I'm super smart. Check out my grades-they're As, for a start. What I lack in looks, well I make up in heart, and well guys, that's totally awesome! This year I plan to study a lot-that would be cool if you were actually hot!
:iconpsycho654:
I know who made it!!!!!
No problem!

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Your eyes in the glass wear your face as a mask...(Cellar Door by Escape the Fate.)
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:iconchristoflehmann:
More !!! Please ?

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